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She Will Sleep Forever by CreepySheepStudio She Will Sleep Forever by CreepySheepStudio
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Frozen in time,
Hasn't aged at all.
Been stuck like this,
Larger than I can recall.

She's been sleeping forever,
She will never open her eyes.
I keep hoping and praying
but these are just lies.

She gave up her life,
So we could have ours.
All because we were
Nothing but cowards...


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Doodle I did today at work today.
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Suiish Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is so sad, her expression is just amazing, the lil flecks of white eyelashes just.. i know its weird to mention them but it adds a lot in my eyes.. its delicate.... nice work!
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CreepySheepStudio Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
:icontso1: Thank you! I was aiming for something a little more surreal and near somber if anything.
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FochonaisFactory Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
spectacular ♥
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CreepySheepStudio Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
:icontso1: Thank you!
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Twilight16Master Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
the poem needs work. most notably, it has an inconsistent syllabic pattern, as well it has some awkward rhyming... try practicing Haikus, and maybe even look into the shakespearean sonnet and iambic pentameter.
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CreepySheepStudio Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013
:icontso1:I appreciate the criticism, but the poem was something drawn up on a whim, rather than that of intricate thought. The artwork was my main attraction.
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Toasted-Strudel Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
;w; myfeels
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CreepySheepStudio Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
:icontso1: Are they good or bad feels. ;~;
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Toasted-Strudel Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
like Imma cry feelz
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WaterFlavor Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So pretty ; o ; 
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